Robber Fly

Maker's notes: 

Robber Fly Looking for Prey

Maker: Dan Jackson
Class: 
B
Place: 
Points: 
30pts
Scores - Interest: 
3
5
3
Scores - Technique: 
3
4
2
Scores - Composition: 
3
4
3
Judges' comments: 
The fly is sharp but there is too much glare on the leaf. The hole in the bottom left draws the eye too much. Cropping to remove that would help. When not submitted to nature, darkening the corners would help as well.