What is it, John?

Maker: John Schilling
Class: 
A
Place: 
Points: 
24pts
Scores - Interest: 
2
3
3
Scores - Technique: 
2
3
3
Scores - Composition: 
2
3
3
Judges' comments: 
Nice colors; could move in on the subject; could possibly isolate it by moving to the right